Raymoclaus's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ZiNiTY - Sweet melody (demo)]

Beautiful

I could listen to this for quite a while, I think you would have gotten away with mking the song like twice as long. *loves the song*

P.S. sucks when you get zerobombed doesn't it? My music is constantly zerobombed. Let me just raise your score by much more from 2.70 to 3.40.

Zinitymusic responds:

awh thanks man!!
your right , i hate when my music gets zerobombed. but its only because some people i know just want to zerobomb me. they always fuck me up at school & yea. i really hate them!

But Thanks man! you are a great person!!! ^^

[SizzloRoX - Summer[RMX]]

Unique and amazing

I say unique because you see so much techno and trance and all that of the sort using the chord progression as the main sound, however this makes the melody stand out. No matter how repetitive that melody gets I'm still saying unique.

SizzloRox responds:

Thank you :D

[Skyland]

subtle yet awesome

This is simple but pretty creative, I love how it is real and down to earth if you know what I mean. I'm talking about the special effects being only an accompaniment to the piano.

(I find it weird how the song's score is a 5 and when I vote a 5 it says my contribution is -0.00000050 even though my vote is the same as the score.)Anyone else notice that before?

DuttonsaysHi responds:

Thanks for rating it a 5 anyway! every vote counts :) and yeah I wanted Simple piano melody that can run along the other synth sounds and a fast pace so it blends well together.

[failure...]

Pity

I listened to some of your other stuff, to be deadly honest your stuff isn't amazing but I know how you feel because I'm pretty much where you are. Probably because I made most of my stuff with Musescore. I think what you lack is diversity and you have too much cheesy sounds like the (kick,kick,kick,crash), Only amazing artists get away with that.

listen to some other peoples songs that sound more within your range of skill. Trying to be like F-777 is too crazy, maybe listen to halcyonic falcon X which is less crazy: regular chord progressions and simple melodies but still sound effetive.

Don't be so harsh on yourself just work on something and if it doesn't sound good to you then it won't to others you have to keep working until it does sound good to you. Go to this link: http://www.youtube.com/user/SuperXav1 er#p/a/u/0/5HGe-EKW1kc
It is my most recent song, realise that it is just one chord progression throughout the whole song nothing complicated. Hope this helped you to get better.

P.S. Your Question: "What's Hardstyle?"
Answer: "It's the sort of techno/trance songs that people would shuffle/dance to."

missingo3886 responds:

ill try that out in my new framework...

[Halindir - March of The Frogs]

soothing

This song is great, even though I could hear that it was very repetitive using the same sounds and similar melodies I still didn't get bored. That is a hard thing to pull off and P.S. thanks for liking my music, it is really hard to get noticed.

Halindir responds:

Thank you very much Raymoclaus!
Indeed at times it can be really hard making repetitive tracks interesting - A challenge I love, though rarely succeed at, I think.
Im glad you liked it

I'll be watching out for new material by you :)

[blues of chiptune]

strange, but cool

I think the bass is kinda catchy and just when i thought that it was going to be one of those songs where the backgrounds stays the same, it changed. Then the drum beat added certainly fit in very well. Not sure what to say about the melody which is the strange part but you still have earned the right to a good mark.

loko-hasta-la-muerte responds:

thanks for the review, your point its very important form me thx :)